Your rhymes and "flow" are mediocre and none existent, respectively. Also, bad costume.
The good: Wicked special effects. Funny idea, though not well executed. You get points for lightning though.
Hilarious in it's simplicity.
Screw the animation and quality, the Jokes in thi flash are just a step above most others.
I wonder, was there a condition to the "Slumber Party" where you had to all add gristly male nudty to every scene? Or was that just a coincidence? Perhapse it was natural considering the "course of events" that was taking place during your sleep over...
All subtle gay jokes aside, I laughed. Nice Work. Dan Malo's was my favorite.
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