timpinisucks's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Epic Beat]

Fat ass funky shit.

That is a sick beat. The string part is cool too but it's needs a little something else, that's why You're getting a 9, and a 5.
Cheers!

[<#=(Lone Piano)=#>]

Nice piano work!

I think this paino part is really dyn-o-mite, but it isnt enough to stand alone and make a smash hit. If you incorporated this into a song with an another melody on top of it, say a blue guitar that gently sweeps me off my feet and has me weeping by the end of the piece, then you would have much greater sucess. You're still getting a 4 from me though, cause I love paino. Nice work.
Feel free to check out some of my stuff, it's basically what I suggested you do to improve ths piece.

[Winterbliss]

If that's trance then I'm gay (and I love trance.)

A really fantastic piece of work. Transitions are what make this noteworthy, they're perfect. Each one. Truely Lovely, well deserved weekly #1. I also love the bass that plays throughout the song. The background hit at the VERY beginning is a nice touch also. (what is that a flute?) I don't find trance music very interesting, but, quite frankly, this song is the shit, I hope I find more trance music to be this cool.

cycerin responds:

Thanks, man! Check out some progressive trance artists like Infected Mushroom if you think you could like more of this stuff.

[Green, Piano(NB Remastered)]

Job well done.

You know my sentiments on your last piece, this fixed them. Awesome job.

[Necro (explicit language)]

Well that was an odd combination!

Very very interesting, funny, and cool sounding.

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[Green, piano]

Very fun piece, loved listening.

I Really, really dont like the all the synth stuff that comes in the middle. It should be an acoustic bass and guitars or horns instead. It almost ruins it, but the first part is so great I'll just review that. I think you could use some help on your drum kits, and by help I mean keep trying, but that is the best piano I've heard on any newgrounds piece to date. Great Job. 5/5, 10/10. Favorited.

[TSH - A Liar Between The Bars]

Generic rock done very memorably!

I noticed a few random timing issues or parts that I didn't feel fit, but since you "cranked this out on a saturday night" it's really not important.
This is pretty much the unpolished equivalent of the punk/alternative rock you find popular these days. It's catchy and fun. And I have a story for you...
When the song started I envisioned a voice singing and I wished you had added a vocal track, just then your voice came in and it sounded exactly like I had heard. It was whack. Good track, 10/10, 5/5.

EOVotes4Pedro responds:

thanks! yeah, i'm still working on my timing now and then, but i'll master it sometime.

-eov4p

[TSH - Little White Truths]

The definition of summer mellowness in song format

First criticism= This needs a bit of work. The drum kit is just ruining it for me for most of the time. I would suggest a much more laid back beat, especially when the crash cymbal comes into play about half way through the track. When the song opens up, the timing is a little arrhythmic, which is not at all what this kind of music needs. Something, quiet, simple, and in the pocket would suit the rest of the song much better, in my opinion. Just putting the hi hat on the downbeat with kicks on 2 and 4 would do nicely I think with a switch to ride with subtle accents towards the middle and end.

The Good= Wow. This really captures that scene in the movie and a certain lazy awkward spirit that serves as a candence for much of my life. I love this track. The beginning with the train car-esque bumping all the way through, it's fantastic. 5/5. I just watched the movie Juno with my girlfriend, and this would, seriously, be at home on the track for that movie.
In conclusion, with that drumkit fixed you might just have created my favorite audio submission.

EOVotes4Pedro responds:

wow, i'm always glad to have someone likeing my stuff, but your FAVORITE? that's really cool...thanks!

[Phantom Planet]

This shows no characteristics of a song.

Had you labeled this a loop, I would have given you a 3/5 for composing a piece that really does sound like a terrestrial exploration theme. However, as a song, it is about the equivalent of me hitting (relatively) random notes on my keyboard for nearly 3 minutes and then posting it. Try to show more depth by adding more than one sound, but more importantly, it needs to follow some semblance of a pattern. There is no distinguishable melody or chorus line. Any series of notes which is repeated appears to be done by pure accident. It DOES show potential however, and with a track similiar to this, with a little more planning before hand, and a drum beat behind it, you could write a nice techno piece.

edtheninja responds:

well i don't want it to be techno and it has a pattern if you hadn't noticed. i go back to the same 4 notes sometimes.

[This World]

The ballad of a new, more emotional, hood.

Loving the melody, I agree with DjMateius, this makes me want to play my piano. I also think the beat could use a tad bit of tweaking. It's not bad by any means, but I think it could be better, and if, if, you managed to achieve that unparalleled level of musical complexity, you would surely trascend to NewGrounds Royalty, just like Dre did back in the 90's. Maybe you didnt hear about it...

S-Rock responds:

Man thanks for the HUGE compliment!
Greatly appreciated.
Anyway what about Dre?